高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章组织结构良好；从句比重偏低，有几处句子错误；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

My hometown L konw ,my hometown is very beautiful age.L see it has many great trees and fishes ,althous it stree is not big and house is ugle ,but l like it But now, many trees and fishes is disappearing,L feel sad, because them are our my friends,L thank our must be our enviroment. L hope our city become more and more beautiful.