复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
As the times change so fastly, there is more and more information that we can learn from the internet. I am not surprising for the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention" which came out recently and i am fond of giving my opinion about it. As far as i concerned, a wealth of information will not destroy our attention even it can contribute to our creativity. On the one hand, we can surf the internet by our smartphones which our width of knowledge can benefits from. On the flipside, the weathy information may led us to some places that we can not image before. It will give us inspiration. Even so we also need to take some measures to aviod being distracted by irrelevant information. we should learn to catch the most important items from the information.what is more, it is also essential for us to look at the books regularly. I hope that everyone can find your virtue at this time!