请作者增加词汇丰富度;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;从句数量过少。
my good friend is mary. she is 8 years old.she is beatiful. she has two big eyes ,two long legs, a small face,a small nose and a small mouth. she hair is long black. she like red. she like cat. she has two cats. one is black one is white. our houses are near. I like she.