高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇使用比较灵活；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

With the development of society, people's quality of life is improving.But it's also to improve our culture inner depth. Its very important of the civilized behavior in the international communicate. We must have to important our artistic appreciation. It could be react one person's accomplishment while we are chat with other's. So its improving our chinese culture is necessary. When we are going to the public occasions in the free time,it's always see some rubbish in anywhere. For example,in the neighborhood park,you can see the spit in public places and leave rubbish everywhere. These are uncivilized phenomena. So we should start with minor matters as the cilivized. First,classified garbage. Next,protect and cherish the flowers and plants,fells not randomly and kinds of threes in our free time. In order to have a better tomorrow in China.