加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;请注意积累词汇量,还要注意单词拼写;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
I have a good friend. She is tall and thin,she have a long hair and big black eyes.She have red mouth.She like singing and dancing.I like piay computer game with her. I wish our friendship can long time,she name is Wei zhongyan that a beautiful girl.She is always happy and like hlpes us.