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衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；作者词汇表达丰富度较高，就是高级词汇用的太少；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。
About "meaning life" For a long time, I have been thinking about what kind of life stye for me.But as so far ,I still have no answer.In genral, It should be thought from two aspects.The first of all,It's life,everyone like happy life.Just like in the spare time, I like to climbing and sleeping,Sometimes i will cook for myself.It's for me,it's meaning life,because i like that. The second,In the work,My work more esaily than before,but it's not i want.Why we need work,because it can rich our life.But now i feel boring,
