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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

In this new time, more and more normal people are going to dress them up as same as the figures who are actually popular. So that many people have intended to judge a person by his or her appearance and even they will incriminal the persons which look poor. Absolutely all we know that it is unwise to judge aperson by their appearance and i want to explain my reasons. On the one hand, a person's appearance may not look very well doesn't means his social state is lower than the people who judge him by his clothes and face.A work-hard man can not regard his appearance as important as his job. On the flipside, appearance can reflect a person's situation outside but it can not to reflect the person's heart inside. Generally speaking, we are supposed to avoid to judge a person by his appearance.What we should do is to discover everyone's spark.

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