2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；过程性词汇偏少。

Comouter and Man With the technology development,The man is more and more inseparable from the computer.Especially in the work,Computer is applied to improve work efficient.But on the other hand,it make people lazy,Before i used to write in pen,but now almost using computer instesd of pen.So i hope that people don't forget to pick up pen.