小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少。

I discover my good friend in the park. She is a girl with red and blue pants, she is interesting in playing the guitar, but I don't like. Then, she wants to play computer game, i think:"i like it so", afterward we go home together to play computer game. Evening is coming, she goes home.