正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
My favorite sport is football. I like playing football by chance. One time, I picked up a football on my way home. Then, I always play it with my friends. It's so interesting that I love it deeply after that. I often train and participate in some competitions with my friends too. What I want to be is a professional football player. My favorite football star is Bakeham.