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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

用户练习作文:

Dear professors, Its a great honor for me to return to my dear alma mater to give you a specialize interview . First of all , please allow me to introduce myself briefly . My name is dengkun because that i was born in kunming in 1991. But , as you can see in my resume , my hometown is chongqing , where is famous for its hot-pot . Since i was born in kunming , i have spent 5 years childhood life here. Later , i have to be sent to my hometown to start my learning life because that i was registered here. Then , after i graduated from my high school , i chose public finance as my major when i entered in the southwestern university of finance and economics in 2010. I met lots of friends here and i love my classmates , my teachers , and even everything in the university . Since i finished my bachelor’s degree, i have been working in the chongqing rail transit group as a accountant for nearly 3 years. I do some accounting work and financial work in the company. Because of this, it enables me to have a better understanding of my major and finance. Maybe you will ask me why i choose finance as my major to start the further study? To tell you the truth , when i graduated from high school , i was always dreaming of doing some financial work . I love finance because finance can help me to to solve a problem in an active thinking way. Finance can teach me how to lend money to the people or the organizations who really need it , how to obtain money in a cheaper way. Facing lots of challenges and opportunities, i want to achieve lots of improvements in the financial era, then making a contribution to the society. Of course, in my spare time, i also have lots of interests, i like to chat with my friends and classmates when i was alone. I love western and chinese philosophy, so, by the way, i was once the president of the philosophy association during my college life. Besides, i like to write poetries because few words can express ones feelings briefly and impressively. During these years ,i have learned how to balance between study, working and entertainment . I really cherish the chance to study in the university again. Thats all, thank you for your listening.

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