参考词汇:
中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake文中衔接词丰富;部分长句用的不错,但从句比例偏少;高级词汇使用贫乏,注意一下个别拼写错误。
the Mid-Autumn Festival As we all know the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of a triditional festivals in china,and it is celebrated on 15-August,in lunar calendar.there are so many activities on that day,for example,it is possible for people everywhere to get toghter to enjoy the happy day, secondly,people would enjoy the full moon.eating moon cake is also an interesting thing.thirdly,people always go to trval on some place and visit their relative. only in these celebrations ,can people disply their happy and joy.