作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Emerging from the drawing, where a hen holds a paper writing its promise of egg quality, with two eggs lies on its side, is the picture of a nation becoming ever more lack of honesty. What the drawer wants to tell us is perfectly included in the poet of integrity. Honesty clearly means different things to different people. Advertisers primarily reject to give publicity to sham products which may be detrimental to customers. Sellers keep making sure to respect clients and describe products in detail, rather than insist on profit-oriented. Integrity applies to individuals as in such a world trust in the densely basis of all success. Further more, our country on the whole, believing people-orientation, relies on all the people in terms of politics. Economy and culture to make progress. We chinese think so highly of honesty that we chinese as a nation can recieve sustained respect from other countries.