错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;衔接成分偏少;请作者增加词汇丰富度,加强拼写检查。
My favorite sport My favorite sport is play football,even I am not very good at it. Before footboll,my favorite sport was basketball. But by change I get a football on my way to home,and play it with my friends,then I fall in love with playing football deeply.Later time until now,I usually practice with my classmates,we make a team and play game with others.Sometimes our team watch football game together.bakehanmu is my favorite footboll player, and become a professional football player is my bigest dream