文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
My favorite sport My favorite sport is playing football,even I am not very good at it. Before football,my favorite sport was basketball. But by change I get a football on my way to home,and play it with my friends,then I fall in love with playing football deeply.Later time until now,I usually practice with my classmates,we make a team and play the game with other team.For play it batter, our team watch football game and learn some good tips .Beckham is my favorite football player, and become a professional football player is my biggest dream.