文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;全文结构较为严谨。
My favorite sport My favorite sport is playing football,even I am not very good at it. Before football,my favorite sport was basketball. But by change I get a football on my way to home,and play it with my friends,then I fall in love with playing football deeply.Later time until now,I usually practice with my classmates,we make a team and play the game with other teams.For play it batter, our team watch football game and learn some good tips we often .Beckham is my favorite football player, and become a professional football player is my biggest dream.