文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;从句使用量不足。
My favorite sport My favorite sport is playing football, even I am not very good at it. Before football, my favorite sport was basketball. But when I got a football on my way to home by change, and play it with my friends,which makes me fall in love with it inmindately and deeply. Later time until now,I practice it with my classmates every weekday after school ,we make a team and play the game with other teams.In order to play it batter, we often watch football game and learn from it . My biggest dream is to become a professional football player just like my idol Beckham.