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My favorite sport My favorite sport is playing football, even I am not very good at it. Before football, my favorite sport was basketball. But when I get a football on my way to home by change, and play it with my friends,which makes me fall in love with it immediately and deeply. Later time until now, I practice it with my classmates every weekday after school, we make a team and play the game with other teams. In order to play it better, we often watch football game and learn from it. My biggest dream is to become a professional football player just like my idol Beckham.