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语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中高级词汇使用熟练，在单词拼写方面要继续努力。
the cartoon vividly shows a harsh picture by making a strong contrast that the fishing resource is desjoyed as the commercial fishing develops without government's control and envelomental awareness by making a strong contrast. there were a large number of fishes in the ocean but only a drifting ship in 1900. however, the affair developed unexpectly to be such a phenomenon that hundred and thousands ship were in a strong competition for depriving the last one fish in the ocean. there is no doubt that such a intense comparison the drawing conveying is for the purpose of criticing the continuing over-fishing which is dritenmentiful to ecosystem and warning our citizen to enhance environmental awareness. since the commercial fishing causes terrible impact on our environment, it is time to take some messures to solve the problem. in my opoion, the most effective method is the government's control because our nation is lack of compelite environmental law, which promote the over-fishing. accordingly, the government must declare punishment to those participanting the over commercial fishing to warn others.
