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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持，也能较准确地使用高级词汇，语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基础较为扎实。
The cartoon vividly shows a harsh picture by making a strong contrast that the fishing resource is destroyed as the commercial fishing develops without government's control and environmental awareness by making a strong contrast. There were a large number of fishes in the ocean but only a drifting ship in 1900. However, the affair developed unexpected to be such a phenomenon that hundred and thousands ship were in a strong competition for depriving the last one fish in the ocean. There is no doubt that such an intense comparison the drawing conveying is for the purpose of criticizing the continuing over-fishing which is determinative to ecosystem and warning our citizen to enhance environmental awareness. Since the commercial fishing causes terrible impact on our environment, it is time to take some measures to solve the problem. In my opinion, the most effective method is the government's control because our nation is lack of complete environmental law, which promotes the over-fishing. Accordingly, the government must declare punishment to those participating in the over commercial fishing to warn others.
