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文中从句过少；部分高级词汇也能熟练使用，但文中有较多拼写错误；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Dear Sigmund, My name is Liu Hong.I'm a Grade 9 student in No 2 middle Schoole.My foverate colour is blun and yeolly. I meeting some promble ,Fristly,my partents are stick to me ,I mostly have no time to play with partner.Sencond,I am cray with cosplay and spent a lot time on it ,I want to give up it but I Can't to do it.My study is more and more badly ,sometimes I can't to hand up my homework.My partents and teachers demand me to give up my only hobbly ,so I need your help to me. I hope to hear from you soon Best wishes! Yours, Liu Hong
