高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My howtown is a contryside called Cihang. In the past, it was really beautiful! There are mang trees,grass and flowers. You can saw mang fish in the river so clearly, because the river was really beautiful. Many hourses were not good, even some of them done not have window! The streets were small ,too. Although people lived hard,everyone was really happy and everyone was like a big family! Now,my hometown is change.There are many big and tall biudings.Such as surpermarket, clothes store,cinema and so on.The street is becoming big and beautiful,many cars drive on it.Also the factories of thes, the enviroment is getting more and more populer. But because of this,the enviroment is getting more and more terrible.The trees are cutted,the fish are almost death.Rivers are not beautiful,air isn't fresh. So now,I think we should change this.We should save the enviroment.Protect our home!