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Dear Sigmund My name is Li Hong . I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School. My star sign is Gemini. Blue and yellow are my favorite colours. Now I have a big problem. My parents are very strict with me .They hardly give me time to play . But love cosplay very much .So I spend lots of time on it after school .Sometime I don't hand in my homeworke on time .Now my stuy is getting worse and weorse .My parents and teachers want me to give up my only hobby . I don”t know how to deal with it .Can you give me some advice? bCooco.net.cNb I hope to hear from yousoon. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hong