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Dear Sigmund My name is Li Hong. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School. My star sign is Gemini.my favorite colours is blue and yellow. Now I had a big problem. My parents are very strict with me .They hardly give me time to play . But I love cosplay very much .So I spent lots of time on it after school .Sometime I don't hand in my homework on time .Now my study is getting worse and worse .My parents and teachers want me to give up my only hobby . I don't know how to deal with it .Can you give me some advice? bCooco.net.cNb I hope to hear from yousoon. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hong
