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Dear Fred , I am so glad that i will have a wonderful summer holidays. And i wanna tell you something about what i want to do in this summer holidays. The first is that i will study how to play football because i think this sport is very funy.The second thing is i want to go abord to watch the beatuiful world.That is all things that i will do his summer holidays.And i wish you will have a wonderful time, too. Best wishes to you. Yours, David.
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