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my hometown As the old saying goes, Everyone's home is their peaceful haven of heart. And hometown is for the most imporant part in heart. My hometown is in countryside, there has birds, fish and flowers everywhere, It's my paradise, I really love there, when I was child, my mother usually tells me that as man should more higher than mountain and more stronger than tiger, these words were are and will in my heart, my journey of growing is full of ups and downs. I wasn't a good boy in my chindhood, I like flighting with other boys. my mother must flighted to me when I flighted with other boys. which memories is very improntant in my childhood and hometown. when I was twenty years ago, I don't go to hometown everymonth, but my hometown gives me spirts ,I will remember it.
