2015年高考作文优秀范文：我的家乡

从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中高级词汇不足。

My hometown As the old saying goes, Everyone's home is their peaceful haven of heart. And hometown is for the most important part in heart. My hometown is in countryside, where has birds, fish and flowers everywhere. It's my paradise, I really love there, when I was child, my mother usually tells me that as man should more higher than mountain and more stronger than tiger, these words were are and will in my heart, my journey of growing is full of ups and downs. I wasn't a good boy in my childhood, I like flighting with other boys. My mother must flighted to me when I flighted with other boys. which memories is very important in my childhood and hometown. when I was twenty years ago, I don't go to hometown everymouth, but my hometown gives me to spirts, I will remember it.