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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文中高级词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；全文结构较为严谨。
It was the summer vacation , my best friend in UIC want to have a good time with me. But we had no idea where were we going. After thinking about many ways, I am thrilled to know that she would going to visit my hometown. First day, we ate lots of delicious food, which is only made in my hometown. It is really special! Second day, we went to the aquarium, and in this picture, my friend was concentrated on the whale in the fish bowl. To my amusement, she tried to talk to the whale! She was so lovely. Later that day, we went to climbed the mountain, and I invited her to my home, we cooked together. Now she was gone, but the vacation is almost over, I can’t wait to see her again. Because we have a great time and I am sure she is my best friend!
