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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,so much people think so,for it's dangerous or stupid,but, i just wan to say every coin has two sides,In some condition,it will be a good thing to put all eggs in one basket. i know that's the why so many people are unwilling to do the things which most of us may think stupidly,for example,some people think we should not put all of our money to buy a apartment,cause that's stupid,we should leave some to save ourselves in case of danger or emergy,that's what they think.But for me,if there is a good chance for us to enhance ourselves,or improve our living enviroment,then why i can't put all my stuff to fouce on it?and why i must to hold something in my mind?I think that's called scared but not safe. On the other one hand,if we can put all stuff we can obtain more,so that's why some other people say we should try our most best to do things we want to do .
