文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;文中拼写错误稍多,词汇表达贫乏。
How should pareants help children to be independent There are lots of pareants take all things for their children, when their children was a students, pareants insteads their children to decieded schools、friends、profess, when their children was grvrenced, pareants insteads their children to decieded works and others. this causes children relay on pareants and not independent. pareants should allow and help children to be independent, at bigins, pareants can let their children to arrange some small things,and give them courage to be independent. then, pareants should encourage them to live alone and do not to help them angin, only by this way can help them to be truly independent.