文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
How should parents help children to be independent There are lots of pareants take all things for their children, when their children was a student, parents insteads their children to decided schools、friends、specialty, when their children was finsh school, parents insteads their children to decided works and others. this causes children relay on parents and not independent. parents should allow and help their children to be independent, at bigins, parents can let their children to arrange some small things, and give them courage to be independent. then, parents should encourage them to live alone and do not to help them angin, only by this way can help them to be truly independent.