2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；作者词汇表达不够多样，要注意单词拼写的检查。

There are lots of pareants take all things for their children, when their children is a student, parents insteads their children to decide schools、friends、specialty, when their children is finsh school, parents insteads their children to decide works and others. All of this causes children have a bad habits to rely on parents . parents should allow and help their children to be independent, at begins, parents can let their children to arrange some small things, and give them courage to be independent. what's more, parents should not arrange every thing for their child. then, parents should encourage them to live alone and do not to help them angin, only by this way can help them to be truly independent.