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There are lots of pareants take all things for their children, when their children is a student, parents insteads their children to decide schools、friends、specialty, when their children is finsh school, parents insteads their children to decide works and others. All of this causes children rely on parents. Parents should allow and help their children to be independent, at begins, parents can let their children to arrange some small things, and give them courage to be independent. what's more, parents should not arrange every thing for their child. then, parents should encourage them to live alone and do not to help them again, only by this way can help them to be truly independent.