2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；高级词汇使用贫乏，注意一下个别拼写错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

On the overuse mobile phone Human usually writed to friends and teachers in ancient. But science is bettering, too many communction apps make gap between in persons and their friends. But as the old saying goes, the coin has two sides. We can find some questions now, almost everyone likes playing their mobile phone, whenever, in bed, in bus, and in having dinner, they like playing the phone very much, when his/her presents want to ban that, they are the most part of have rage.