2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

There are lots of pareants take all things for their children, when their children is a student, parents instead their children to decide which schools、friends、specialty to choose, when their children is finsh school, parents insteads their children to decide works and others. All of this factor caused children rely on their parents. But child would not alway raly on parents, so parents should allow and help their children to be independent. At begining, parents can let their children to arrange some small thing by theirselves, and give them courage to do something alone. what's more, parents should not arrange everything for their child. the best and farest way to help child to be independent is let them live alone, do not help them again, only by this way can help them to be truly independent farest.