2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分高级词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

There are lots of pareants take all things for their children, when their children is a student, parents instead of their children to decide which schools、friends、specialty to choose, when their children is finsh school, parents instead of their children to decide works and others. All of this factor caused children rely on their parents. But child would not alway raly on parents, so parents should allow and help their children to be independent. At beginging, parents can let their children to arrange some small things by Themselves, and give them courage to do something alone. what's more, parents should not arrange everything for their child. the best way to help children to be independent is let them live alone, do not help them again, only by this way can help them to be truly independent as soon an possible.