2015年高考作文优秀范文：给父母的一封信

作者词汇量积累不错，高级词汇积累还不够，拼写错误也要注意；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；全文结构较为严谨。

dear mom and dad: Im writting this letter to tell you to pay more attention to your body. It is important for everyone to keep healthy,however,you are so busy with your work that you do not have time doing sports,and i am worried about you.what i really want to do is you have a healthy life and good body,so there are some suggestions for you.firstly,you should go to work by foot not buy kar or bus.secondly,you should take a practice in a gym once a week at least, such as swimming playing basketball. third,it is necessary for you to have a balance diet,which can keep your body healhty.last but not least,do not work too late,with a whole day's work,you should go to bed earlyer and have a rest.no matter how busy you are,keep doing. only by doing these things all the time,can you get your body healthier.i love you. yours doughter li