托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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While some people addlict to being happy in the diverse world, someone confuse about their lifes without any satisfied. A specific reasearch coming from The Economist, one of the most creidble magazine in th world, unveal the secret of unhappiness which is result of over-speeding of the changing world. However, i, without hesitation, stress that the fact, to some degree, is likely to be true. Of millions who suffer unhappiness in each second, people finally discover the source of this which comes from the comparesion of other people in the internet. The quintessential issue of distortion causes less satisfication for everyone. The range of relationship of people, for instance, was locked in a small town in the past, whereas, nowadays, the internet contect with each one all over world. The comparesion among them have a trendency to expend, which deepen delimma of people. Even if when people entirely figure out their archivement of sucess in thier close circle of relationship, they are as such to unveal greater sucesssful anyone, such as Lin, Jin or Xin in the internet. With such severely constraction among them, people amplfy their disappointment. It seems obviously to convience that flourish money flowing around each cornor, occupy the entire lifes of people. When people only focus on the ambition of financal success and neglicted the power of mental world, the individual mental world are inclined to get rid of your life as same as you did. Lacking of idealist to surpport your desiration, people merely become the high-prized animal. My father, for example, is a typical case for me to emphysis on the construction of mental world. In fact, my father was just graduated from high-school. Although his business had not any relationship with books. my father spent over 2 hours a day in order to reading. In case of being defeated by other competitors, my father even went to university to study, thereby enabling himself becoming happy everyday. Only does people learn how to control themselves, people would universally exert on the pressue of aimless ambition which breakdown your correctly wondering and expection of the world.