托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中高级词汇表达比较恰当，词汇拼写要再接再厉。

Surprisingly, some parents domonstrate that palying computer games is harmful for their children in result of a waste of time. Instead of playing computer games, of millions who are expected to read books or study harder by parents, children, factually, lose the interests of study and, to some degree, inhibit their future carrers. To support my claim about the benefit of playing computer games to children, the evidences are convenient to be found in variable aspects. First off, playing computer games as same as playing basketball or music instruments is one of the methods to refresh metal conditon of everyone. Harm as playing computer games is in over-comsuming circumstance, children are likely to receive more benefit to relax theirselves in control of parents by the limitation of the habits. My sister, for example, was confused about the failure of study while she spent almostly whole space time to study. After catching the idea about relaxation of playing computer games are inclined to be a credible way to help her, her parents were attempting to buy some computer games for my sister to play. In the monitoring of her parents, my sister get great grades in the final exam because of the efficacy of relaxation of playing computer games. Bonus, increasement of knowledge for children seems to be another advantage of playing computer games. With overwhelmingly numbers of games, people include the children are likely to absorb knowledge in the duration of playing computer games. The experience of myself believably proof that i mentioned above. Even when i was 12 years old, i was decided to take part in the competition of knowledge. Comparing with the competitors who were older than me in 10 to 12 years, i fought against them one by one without any fear as all questions asking about the history of SanGuo. By playing each of heroes in the game of SanGuo, i was continuely answering the question without any hesitation in full memory of each details of them, thereby enabling meself taking the chapnion in the final battle. According to the fact of achievement of winner in the cometition games, the confidence resting on advantage of playing computer games spurred me on learning more information from historial games or any other genre. Fortunately, all of my firends have already been my fan for my knowledgable ability. To sum up, in group to improve both mental and physical health for children, the fault of misinterperting games in computer which is considered to be the monster in paretns eyes must to be straightly and the truth of games would spring more benefits for chileren and encourage them in right way.