单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
My friend's name is Kangkang. He is a good friend. He is a funny people. He has big eyes and ears. He also has a big face. He is tall and fat. He likes watching TV and playing a football. He is also a good reader. if you ask him a question, he will glad to answer you.