请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
My friend's name is Kangkang. He is a good friend. He likes to play computer games. He is funny. He has big eyes and ears. He also has a big face. He is tall and fat. He likes watching TV and playing a football. He is also a good reader. if you ask him a question, he will be glad to answer you.