正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达不够丰富,要多积累高级词汇;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
My friend's name is Kangkang. He is a good friend. He likes to play computer games. He is funny. His eyes are big, but his ears are small. He also has a big face. He is tall and fat. He likes watching TV and playing a football. He is also a good reader. Provided that you ask him a question, he will be glad to answer you.