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In china,we have a traditional festival in Augst 15th,There have a habbit of eating moon cakes in that day.In china,We called it Mid Autumn Festival.It has a long history.The market have a lot of moon cakes when the Mid Autumn Festival would coming before.An egg flavored or fruits flavored ect.However,We have three holidays when the Mid Autumn Festival was coming.we will take some fruits and moon cakes to visit our good friends.then in Augst 15th evening,We will have dinner with family's,It repersents family reunion,After dinner,We will put the moon cake with the moon unstairs.There is a legend that the moon cake should be eaten by the moon first,And can be eaten by oneself.Of course,That is just a legend.There is not a scientific basis.After with the moon,We can eat moon cake happily with our family.This is the traditional festival in china.That is so funny,isn't it?