高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past decades,my home town owns beautifullly sences:big green trees arund the town;rivers clearly and fishs alively;along the narrow streets there were poorly houses;people who live there were work hard and absent money.But at the present:skyscrapers are all over the town;mordern cars roar down the streets;The development of the industry causes bad environment;trees and fishs are decrease;so the most important thing is treat the polluation.