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When it comes to the question environment protection, water protection is important sources for our life.though the water covers mostly of the earth's sufface,the water which can use to our life is less.so it is necessary to protect water resource from now on. for one thing,using.in our society,water is used for the industries,steel,petroleum,paper and rubber.if we do not protect water recource,there would be no water for us.what i really hope is to like to is, in my part , it is high time that we should protect water to satisfy the needs of their people.only when we are devoted ourselves to protect water,can our life will be more and more beautiful