Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Whether the education hava a rerated in income really interests many people very much.And this survey may be able to give us a good answer. From this chart,it is abvious that the earning really have a influence with earnings.Those who with higher education also have a higher salary in average.In this chart,someone who have a Doctoral degree is given a highest salary in average while those with lowver degree just get lowver income in average.So we can easily conclude that a better degree really do well to our carea.Someone with well eaducated can find a position in a commpany than those who do not.And to make more competed in the future,study hard to gain a higher may be benifit us very much.But this not the only way to give us a better future,it means that only with more abilities so that we can have more chances and confidents in our life.