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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者词汇量积累较好,但高级词汇的积累仍需加强,还要避免有拼写错误。

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Whether the education hava a rerated in income really interests many people very much.And this survey may be able to give us a good answer. From this chart,it is abvious that the earning really have a influence with earnings.Those who with higher education also have a higher salary in average.In this chart,someone who have a Doctoral degree is given a highest salary in average while those with lowver degree just get lowver income in average.So we can easily conclude that a better degree really do well to our carea.Someone with well eaducated can find a position in a commpany than those who do not.And to make more competed in the future,study hard to gain a higher may be benifit us very much.But this not the only way to give us a better future,it means that only with more abilities so that we can have more chances and confidents in our life.

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