小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have afriend,she,s name is lucy,she,s from egland,she has blue eyes,and she like smile.she always help others,nomatter whoever they are,almost everyone love her.we ofter go to school together,go home together,and play game together.our friendship is solid,we think so.but 3 years ago she went back to her hometown,i miss her very much. how lucky!she is my best friend.