单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺;复杂句的使用不是很丰富。
I have a good friend.her name is zhou li .she is a very tidy and beautiful girl.she love her family very much. she love animal ,like cut , dog and pig ,the last week she pick up a little cut in the load.she love it very much,she talk care it like she is her mum