小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做得很好，请注意积累词汇量；文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练。

I have a good friend.Her name is Zhou Li .she is a very tidy and beautiful girl.She loves her family very much. She love animal ,like cut , dog and pig ,the last week she pick up a little cut in the load.She loves it very much,she talk care of it like she is her mum