小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做得很好，请注意积累词汇量；文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练。

I have a good friend.Her name is Zhou Li.she is a very tidy and beautiful girl.She loves her family very much. She loves animal,like cut, dog and pig,Last week she picked up a little cut in the load.She loves it very much,she took care of it like she is her mum